Nenjiniley Nee Netru Vandhai
Submitted by abi sudha on Tue, 2011-02-15 12:05
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My daddy wrote this kaadhal kavithai for my amma....
Same kavithai has won Valentine's day special - kaadhal kavithai competition, conducted by Dinamalar.
Dr.Rekha Shetty
Tue, 2011-02-15 21:19
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Rao sir ,please translate this in hindi or english for our benefit
bsindhuja
Tue, 2011-02-15 21:59
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Cute and sweet love-gift for your mom from dad!!
-Sindhuja
judelined
Tue, 2011-02-15 22:30
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So sweet of your dad to acknowledge your mom in such a romantic way - congrats
umaraja
Wed, 2011-02-16 06:54
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a grt gift valid more than a tonne of gold or diamonds to a lovable wife
vijaysowmya
Wed, 2011-02-16 09:22
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a very nice poem and very precious gift given to your mom by your father..
jkmrao
Wed, 2011-02-16 18:15
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My sincere attempt at transcreation of the original -
In the youth of roaring twenties we were lovers
In the experience of the serene fifties we are still lovers
Certainly this is one truth that runs through life
As we grow older, our love grows younger
Each day that I am with you is a source of joy
You're the inspiration that guides me
Inside you am I and inside me are you
For you I am and for me are you
Skillful and sweet
You conquer me with those sidelong glances
and become sweeter still
After all these years, the memory of that first kiss is still a bliss
Our unbound love will lead us together ... till the end
My dear friend and eternal love!
Regards! - mOhana
abi sudha
Thu, 2011-02-17 10:30
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Hi Mohana,
Thanks, brilliant work......
jayamohan
Wed, 2011-02-16 19:47
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Both the kavidhai and the translation are good!
Dr.Rekha Shetty
Wed, 2011-02-16 20:55
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Rao sir thank you for the translation. What a love .feel envy .hope one day my hubby will write this kind of poem for me. I know he loves me the way i love him but everyone can't express like the gentleman here .Wish both of them very very long happy married life.In short very lovely ,touchy,true love poem
judelined
Wed, 2011-02-16 20:57
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wonderful translation JKM - I knew I would never have been able to do so much justice had I attempted...
smahalakshmi
Sun, 2011-02-27 00:44
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Nice poem by your dad. Congratulations.