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BLUE JEANS

“You’re not coming like this?” I asked, shocked.
“Why, what’s wrong with this?” he mocked.
“You can’t wear jeans when you go to see a girl!”
“I don’t see why not?” he gave his moustache a twirl.
“What about our tradition? Go wear a dhothi!”
“Ma, I’m not seeing the granny, I’m meeting the pothi!”
“Nothing doing! Go change at once!” – I was firm…
“Oh, I’m not coming!” He eyed me like a worm.

After an hour’s pleading, this side and that
He came in a dhothi and unsmiling, sulking sat
Between us,as we recalled our past in nostalgic scenes…
He, as unhappy as can be, till she came out – in her blue jeans!

anirudh's picture

nice Wink ...see what moms do for us Smile ...cool poem, thanks Ushaji

rajamma_2's picture

Nice poem Usha. I know Anirudh will be the first one to comment!!!!
rajamma

ammuchandhini's picture

lovely poem... mam there will definetely be a smile at everyone's face at d end sentence...

gvidhya's picture

Ani boy.. so whats ur plan? How u gonna see ur girl? Dhoti or jeans.. (I think dhoti if its weekdays or casuals if week ends :)))))))))))))))))))

Rajusree's picture

Nice one. What to do? that's how it is now )-:

Lata's picture

Good one.

lakshmiraghu's picture

anirudh plese discuss with your mom and tell us soon as jayanthiji is already searching girls for you.(remember what jayanthiji told that day)

gvidhya's picture

yarachum en machinanuku ponnu irunda solungapa.. hehe

k.jayavijayan's picture

wat? :/

Lata's picture

I think a big portion of the comments belong in the Match Making section of Cafe Smile

http://www.ikolam.com/forum/2691

Padma Prakash's picture

Usha, good one. I like the way you had summarised the "Bangalore meet" also. The style of writing is very good. At very first meet with you at 18th Cross, I couldn't make out that a very good writer is hiding within you. What a foolish I am.OK Better late than never. keep publishing and make all of our mind filled with fun and enthusiasm. Thank You Usha.

jayamohan's picture

Thank God! Not in shorts!

Dr.Rekha Shetty's picture

cool,meaningful poem.