kutti chellam

after reading jkm sirs poem i wanted to share one of my poems written during my college days,
the word potta pulla is used just as an expression and not to hurt neither any mil nor anybodys feelings

kutti chellam

manjal soodi mangalam odhi
mannavan iruppidam thanjam pugundhal
maadham naangu
varudam naangu
minnalai sendradhu
malalaiondru kaiyil illai
maruthuvam seiyadha naalae illai
maamiyar aechukkal
samiyar poochukkal
naatkalum nagandradhu
kavip pennum kaaithuvittal
maadham moondrum
masakaiyil melindhu
moovirendu maadhathil
seemandha seeraatu
thaiyana paarattu
kunkumapoo saerthukkadi endran kanavan
en pulla sirichalae
kunkumamum sevandhidumae endraal
yaelam maadham ettip paarka
kuttichellam etti udhaikka
ettam maadham,pothena kaalgal veenga
methana magilchi
ethanai naalada kannae
unnai paarpaen en kan munnae
onbhadhu maadham pirakkaiyilae
valaiyal pottu sirikaiyilae
iduppu valium inbam
kurukku valiyum koodhugalam
serukku kondaen thaimaiyil
pathum pirandhadhu
mottu vedithadhu
muthu malarndhadhu
en kuttichellam
kunkumach chivappai
ettip paarthaal
en idhaiyathin uccham
imaiyathai vida uccham
thootilai thalliyapadi
kattil arugae vandha mamiyarin munumunuppu
ada potta pulla thanaakkum
prasavathil illadha vali
ippodhu aval idhaiyathil

ammuchandhini's picture

Wow....nice poem uma...thanks for sharing....didn't u send it to any magazines...it would've got published na...atleast in ur college magazine....

Dr.Rekha Shetty's picture

Umsa chuparustam ji .I will get translated from my steno then i will comment on poem dear

subashini's picture

very beautiful lines uma.yes, whenever we hear the words , we feel pain only in our heart.yeththanai naalaagumo theriyavillai indha yennangal maraya.

rajamma_2's picture

Uma, I need somemre time to go thru this. I'll search my old diary where I have writtten my feeling in the form of a poem, will share it with u all
rajamma

smahalakshmi's picture

Uma, nice poem dear. As Rani said, you should have sent it to some magazines.

Mahalakshmi

umaraja's picture

thank u rani (s but i didnt try out in those days but exhibited in papus skool PARENTS HOBBY SHOW,), rekha mam, suba mam, rajamma mam(take ur own time) and maha

vasanthi's picture

very very nice poem uma...thanks for sharing...

umaraja's picture

thank u vasanthi