Quite a good attmept and congratulations, ma'am. If you don't mind, may I make a few suggestions?
Exact alignment must be attempted when cutting and pasting, unless it is not possible. The eyes have the knack of catching any misalignment. I like the central motif. The distortion gives a novel look. The pink and the green on the orange background somehow do not go well (to me). They may be substituted with subdued colours. Colours are only a means to create beauty, not an end in itself. Individually the colours may be good, but as a combination, they must click together. I am always reminded by an Agassi commercial of his early days when he was quite brash. This is tennis season, right? How many of you remember those commercials (is it for canon)? He will splash colours on the walls and pour one over the other, quite hilarious!
Yes, Subashini, any kolam with out a comment from Mr.mOhanaji looks incomplete.In the beginning I too was feeling like you. But later realised that there is some point in his silence also.Even though you were also trying so many padikolams in computer media, like him ,he is silently admiring your starting trouble , improvement and slow but steady improvement. Since u r using a medium in which he is a Master,so he didn't want to discourage you in the beginning by pointing out the minus features. So his silence only made you to try again and again in that line to finally get his comments.
I think not only you but all ikolam members value his comments (followed by helping clues) like an appreciation from a Guru.
So sweet Subashini - I never thought that my small small encouraging comments would have such an impact on you, but I believe in that formula because it is only when you receive appreciation that you will want to give something better next time. Also I like your enthusiasm - keep it going Subashini we are always there
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rajamma_2
Fri, 2009-09-11 19:55
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சà¯à®ªà®¾à®·à®¿à®©à®¿ à®’à®™à¯à®• கமà¯à®ªà¯à®¯à¯‚டà¯à®Ÿà®°à¯ கோலம௠நாளà¯à®•à¯à®•௠நாள௠ரொமà¯à®ª அழகா வரà¯à®¤à¯ .கலர௠கொஞà¯à®šà®®à¯ கமà¯à®®à®¿ பணà¯à®£à¯à®™à¯à®• , இனà¯à®©à¯à®®à¯ அழகா இரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯.
lakshmiraghu
Fri, 2009-09-11 20:32
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Subhashiniji,nice kolam
subashini
Fri, 2009-09-11 21:11
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Thank you rajamma madam.Thank you lakshmi.
judelined
Fri, 2009-09-11 23:04
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Hmmm Subashini - nice work - maybe the pink should have been a little bit lighter - otherwise everything else seems ok...
subashini
Fri, 2009-09-11 23:33
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Thank you jude.thanks for advice and comments too.I also feel pink dominate other colours.
subashini
Fri, 2009-09-11 23:39
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ராஜமà¯à®®à®¾ மேடம௠ஒணà¯à®£à¯ கவனிசà¯à®šà®¿à®™à¯à®•ளா ?à®’à®™à¯à®• படிகà¯à®•ோல தà¯à®¤ விடà¯à®Ÿà¯ நான௠இனà¯à®©à¯à®®à¯ வரல .பிஙà¯à®•௠கலர௠ஜாஸà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à®¾ இரà¯à®•à¯à®•ிறதை அனà¯à®ªà¯à®ªà®¿à®¯ பிறக௠தான௠கவனிசà¯à®šà¯‡à®©à¯ .
dibbutn
Sat, 2009-09-12 00:01
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Nice one subashini ma'am...
subashini
Sat, 2009-09-12 00:02
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Thank you pushpa
jkmrao
Sat, 2009-09-12 15:48
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Quite a good attmept and congratulations, ma'am. If you don't mind, may I make a few suggestions?
Exact alignment must be attempted when cutting and pasting, unless it is not possible. The eyes have the knack of catching any misalignment. I like the central motif. The distortion gives a novel look. The pink and the green on the orange background somehow do not go well (to me). They may be substituted with subdued colours. Colours are only a means to create beauty, not an end in itself. Individually the colours may be good, but as a combination, they must click together. I am always reminded by an Agassi commercial of his early days when he was quite brash. This is tennis season, right? How many of you remember those commercials (is it for canon)? He will splash colours on the walls and pour one over the other, quite hilarious!
Regards! - mOhana
subashini
Sat, 2009-09-12 22:44
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நனà¯à®±à®¿ மொஹநà¯à®œà®¿.à®®à¯à®¤à®²à¯ à®®à¯à®±à¯ˆà®¯à®¾à®• உஙà¯à®•ள௠கவனதà¯à®¤à¯ˆ கவரà¯à®¨à¯à®¤à®¤à®±à¯à®•௠மà¯à®¤à®²à®¿à®²à¯ சநà¯à®¤à¯‹à®· படà¯à®•ிறேன௠.நடà¯à®µà®¿à®²à¯ இரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ டிசைன௠எனகà¯à®•௠எதிர௠பாராமல௠கிடைதà¯à®¤à®¤à¯à®¤à®¾à®©à¯.(உஙà¯à®•ள௠கமெணà¯à®Ÿà¯à®¸à¯ போலே ).உஙà¯à®•ள௠பாராடà¯à®Ÿà¯à®•ளை à®à®±à¯à®±à¯à®•à¯à®•ொள௠வதà¯à®ªà¯‹à®²à¯‡ நீஙà¯à®•ள௠கà¯à®±à¯ˆà®•ளை சà¯à®Ÿà¯à®Ÿà®¿à®•ாடà¯à®Ÿà®¿ இரà¯à®ªà¯à®ªà®¤à¯ˆà®¯à¯à®®à¯ à®à®±à¯à®±à¯à®•ொளà¯à®•ிறேன௠.கà¯à®±à¯ˆà®•ளை தவிரà¯à®•à¯à®• à®®à¯à®¯à®±à¯à®šà®¿ செயà¯à®µà¯‡à®©à¯ .
rajamma_2
Sun, 2009-09-13 08:00
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Yes, Subashini, any kolam with out a comment from Mr.mOhanaji looks incomplete.In the beginning I too was feeling like you. But later realised that there is some point in his silence also.Even though you were also trying so many padikolams in computer media, like him ,he is silently admiring your starting trouble , improvement and slow but steady improvement. Since u r using a medium in which he is a Master,so he didn't want to discourage you in the beginning by pointing out the minus features. So his silence only made you to try again and again in that line to finally get his comments.
I think not only you but all ikolam members value his comments (followed by helping clues) like an appreciation from a Guru.
subashini
Sun, 2009-09-13 08:31
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கà¯à®±à¯ˆà®•ளை ஒதà¯à®¤à¯à®•à¯à®•ொணà¯à®Ÿà®¾à®²à¯‡ நிறைகள௠தானாய௠வரலாம௠.நான௠இநà¯à®¤ அளவà¯à®•à¯à®•௠வநà¯à®¤à®¤à®±à¯à®•௠காரணமே ஜூடி, லகà¯à®·à¯à®®à®¿, இரà¯à®µà®°à¯à®®à¯ நான௠எதை போடà¯à®Ÿà®¾à®²à¯à®®à¯ பாராடà¯à®Ÿà®¿à®¯à®¤à¯à®®à¯ தானà¯.சரியாய௠போட à®®à¯à®¯à®±à¯à®šà®¿ செய௠ததறà¯à®•௠அவரà¯à®•ள௠காரணம௠எனà¯à®±à®¾à®²à¯ கோலம௠போட à®®à¯à®¯à®±à¯à®šà®¿ செய௠ததரà¯à®•à¯à®•ே நீஙà¯à®•ளà¯à®®à¯ , லதாவà¯à®®à¯ தான௠காரணம௠.எலà¯à®²à¯‹à®°à¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ என௠நனà¯à®±à®¿ .
indira sundar
Mon, 2009-09-14 12:19
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Beautiful kolam Subashini ma'am.
-Indira
Purni
Mon, 2009-09-14 21:02
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Lovely Kolam, Subashini Ma'am......
judelined
Tue, 2009-09-15 01:46
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So sweet Subashini - I never thought that my small small encouraging comments would have such an impact on you, but I believe in that formula because it is only when you receive appreciation that you will want to give something better next time. Also I like your enthusiasm - keep it going Subashini we are always there
subashini
Tue, 2009-09-15 22:59
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thank you indra and purni.
subashini
Tue, 2009-09-15 23:20
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"சà¯à®Ÿà®°à¯ விளகà¯à®•ாயினà¯à®®à¯ தூணà¯à®Ÿà¯à®•ோல௠தேவை " இதைநீஙà¯à®•ளà¯à®®à¯ கேடà¯à®Ÿà¯à®°à¯à®ªà¯à®ªà¯€à®°à¯à®•ள௠ஜà¯à®Ÿà¯€.நீஙà¯à®•ள௠தூணà¯à®Ÿà®¿à®µà®¿à®Ÿà¯à®Ÿà¯€à®°à¯à®•ள௠, நான௠எரிநà¯à®¤à¯‡à®©à¯ ,அவà¯à®µà®³à®µà¯à®¤à®¾à®©à¯ .இதையே பாராடà¯à®Ÿà¯à®•ிறாரà¯à®•ளே ,இனà¯à®©à¯à®®à¯ கொஞà¯à®šà®®à¯ à®®à¯à®¯à®±à¯à®šà®¿ செயà¯à®¯à®²à®¾à®®à¯‡ எனà¯à®±à¯ தோனà¯à®±à®¿à®¯à®¤à®¾à®²à¯ பà¯à®¤à®¿à®¯à®¤à¯ˆ கறà¯à®±à¯à®•à¯à®•ொளà¯à®³ à®®à¯à®¯à®±à¯à®šà®¿ செயà¯à®¤à¯‡à®©à¯ .இனà¯à®©à¯à®®à¯ செயà¯à®µà¯‡à®©à¯ .நனà¯à®±à®¿ .நீஙà¯à®•ள௠à®à®©à¯ இதை கமà¯à®ªà¯à®¯à¯‚டà¯à®Ÿà®°à®¿à®²à¯ போட கூடாத௠எனà¯à®±à¯ ராஜமà¯à®®à®¾ கேடà¯à®Ÿà®¤à®¾à®²à¯ தான௠பà¯à®¤à¯ à®®à¯à®¯à®±à¯à®šà®¿à®¯à®¿à®²à¯à®®à¯ ஈடà¯à®ªà®Ÿà¯à®Ÿà¯‡à®©à¯ .அவரà¯à®•à¯à®•à¯à®®à¯ என௠நனà¯à®±à®¿ .
judelined
Wed, 2009-09-16 00:36
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Very good Subashini, I like your spirit