Aarushi,i had the pleasure of reading your poem &enjoyed it tremendously.it was like coming to your home on navaratri .keep up the good work .may god bless you.
AarushiK, Are you a student or a teacher working in a school. THe SEVEN STEPS tells me that you are a born poet who can express the feelings in a nice simple words.
I recall another poem with the same title (saptapadi) I wrote an year ago in telugu.
People who know the language may read it. Others can follow the pictures I have there
and guess what it is about. It is about women.
In fact, the steps I used in my hOli rangOli was originally photographed for that poem.
The link is -
http://www.eemaata.com/em/issues/200801/1196.html
Regards! - mOhana
Mohanaji,your poem saptapadi was very touching .first it is about Sitamata,after that is that women in general how they are treated??i have no more words to say about the poem because i was almost in tears when i completed the poem.
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ashanagendra
Fri, 2009-03-13 00:00
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Aarushi,i had the pleasure of reading your poem &enjoyed it tremendously.it was like coming to your home on navaratri .keep up the good work .may god bless you.
rajamma_2
Fri, 2009-03-13 00:22
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AarushiK, Are you a student or a teacher working in a school. THe SEVEN STEPS tells me that you are a born poet who can express the feelings in a nice simple words.
judelined
Fri, 2009-03-13 00:27
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a very well expressed poem indeed Aarushi.
judelined
Fri, 2009-03-13 01:06
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Aaru is it you???
jkmrao
Fri, 2009-03-13 02:27
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Good photograph and nice poem, keep it up.
I recall another poem with the same title (saptapadi) I wrote an year ago in telugu.
People who know the language may read it. Others can follow the pictures I have there
and guess what it is about. It is about women.
In fact, the steps I used in my hOli rangOli was originally photographed for that poem.
The link is -
http://www.eemaata.com/em/issues/200801/1196.html
Regards! - mOhana
viji_j86
Fri, 2009-03-13 02:43
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Aarushi, very nice.
I enjoyed your poem and the near by kolu also.
viji
ashanagendra
Fri, 2009-03-13 02:53
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Mohanaji,your poem saptapadi was very touching .first it is about Sitamata,after that is that women in general how they are treated??i have no more words to say about the poem because i was almost in tears when i completed the poem.